09-02-2015, 06:22 AM
(08-02-2015, 03:25 PM)Jamie_lost Wrote: I hate to say it, but is sounds really dark, almost suicidal. As mentioned, it would make a great song. Although, its not something to listen to when we are in one of our dark places.
Yikes, it was not intended to be that dark. Though I may dabble in the occasional what if scenario of my not being here, it is not something I would follow through on. Life, albeit sometimes a HUGE pain in the rear, is very precious. Everything I have seen and experienced has made me who I am. Maybe it's good, maybe it's not. Anyways as I stated, it was not intended to incite any thoughts of suicide.
As for the song part, I suppose I am now contemplating that part.

(08-02-2015, 07:00 PM)breastman59 Wrote: Beautifully written...yes its dark...but haven't we all been there...this has many of the same emotions that I have been enduring the last several years......Thank you for sharing.....
Thank you breastman59, for the comments. I hope that I can find myself on the extreme side of a more cheerful emotion and maybe write something a bit more positive. I have to catch that roller coaster ride just right.

